The big problem being I'm in my head, too. Great typography piece; the way you used line breaks here to create both emphasis and force the timing is just perfect. And your neon effects are quite well done, too (and this is coming from someone who knows what they're doing with neon. )
I'm infatuated with neons. I love them, I can't help it. This one was inspired heavily by an abuzeedo tutorial, but -like most tutorials- went its own way during the process. Thanks so much for your comment, I appreciate it a lot!